You know what would have worked well for this? Thee frames, one where you're not made up with the eyebrows and fangs. one where you're both blurry and one with the fangs and makeup, so it would be like a transformation sort of thing...
Just something that popped into my head.
Anyway, nice shoot
Oh, also, I just realised what the eyebrows remind me of: Star Trek original series Klingons! Yeah, my nerd is showing.